Correção da minha redação (:

Hey guys! No último post eu trouxe um desafio pra vocês: corrigir uma redação que eu fiz a aula de Inglês quando era criança.

Hoje eu trouxe a correção pra vocês. Aproveite pra conferir se você tinha encontrado todos os erros!

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So many people can not (cannot ou a forma contraída can't) tell which (what) is better: being married or single. Everything has pros and cons, and sometimes we need to think well before make (making) a decision.

When you are single, you are free to do anything you want. You can go out with your friends, you can go to parties, you can travel or even go to live in another country! You can make your decisions only for you, without thinking of someone else. To sum up is (it's) amazing.

On the other hand, sometimes you can feel lonely.

One day, your friends will get married, and you will not have company to go out, travel, go to (the) cinema, have a (não se usa a/an antes de refeições) dinner, etc.

And then you will feel the need to have someone on your side, and buy a dog will not solve your problems.

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E aí, você tinha encontrado todos os erros?

E você tem um texto seu pra compartilhar e o pessoal tentar corrigir? Manda pra gente! <3